It's so bad that you might able to sell that shit in Hollywood.

I bet i could write a better English Piece than that... For example: Poetry-

 

A Day In The Life Of An Emo ***

Realized His Post Was making all the g0ts Nag

His Story Clearly Wasn't Too Great

So bad infact, worse than d0wn's Sheit.

Take a lesson from this, You Are a fool

Never post shit thinking it makes you look cool...

 

Period.

absent of any sort of rhetoric

 

not fail for rage; fail for awful

 

thx

your story sucks balls

gayest story ever.

 

If my kid brought that home to me I would beat him with a fucking PVC pipe then disown his ass.

FAK3R']correct, also it doesn't seem like you bother to proof-read your work.

and you change mood too often with no coherency... that's complete garbage story telling skills

 

thanks tom clancy

I didnt even read the whole thing, to fucking boring and shitty.

I don't even bother to read stuff that long, my attention span only goes to like 3 sentences

I have shortened it so that it more matches your target audience:

 

This story is bad. It is about Jesus and Hitler. It is not good. Fill in the blanks.

k

 

Thanks for quoting the whole story you fucking retard.

 

gayest story ever.

 

If my kid brought that home to me I would beat him with a fucking PVC pipe then disown his ass.

 

You don't have a kid.

I saw "JEWDEN" and completely disregarded anything you had to say in this post. First off, its "Juden" and its pronounced "You-din".

gay. where is the rage?

That was complete shit.

That was the gayest shit I've ever read.:drool2:

I'm sure the paper and pencils were raged for having to be used to write that crap.

What's your teacher's name? I would like to deliver flowers to her classroom.