Ok this is my first rage so don't bitch because it sucks.:naughtyd:

Constructive critism or any tips on how to improve would be great!

 

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Short and sweet.

Mostly good quotes.. but we need to work on the length a little.

 

7.5/10.. but could be alot higher if it was bigger with the same quality of quotes throughout.

 

Very good first try!

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Leopulse;437679']Short and sweet.

Mostly good quotes.. but we need to work on the length a little.

 

7.5/10.. but could be alot higher if it was bigger with the same quality of quotes throughout.

 

Very good first try!

 

 

 

And work on the layout so its easier to read.

Thanks! I'll defineitly take those tips into concideration. :D

 

But, what kind of layout would you have in mind, Ac?

  hybrid3 said:

Thanks! I'll defineitly take those tips into concideration. :D

 

But, what kind of layout would you have in mind, Ac?

 

Spread out the quotes abit, and not so many on one line.

Ok, will do next time!

make the background black. it makes good contrast.