Posted March 7, 200520 yr first draft, a few things to be re-tweaked...but anyhow http://gra.midco.net/jeremy.baker/updogg/frontsmall.jpg http://gra.midco.net/jeremy.baker/updogg/backsmall.jpg
March 7, 200520 yr Author Looks pretty nice. Only thing I would recommend is change the glasses on the dog. lewl wtf are you talking about
March 7, 200520 yr leave the glasses on the dog it adds more color to the picture. What I recommend is the shadow for the aff. at the bottom.
March 7, 200520 yr I mean like give him blue glasses or something. The pink clashes with the orange and yellow. Keep the same style, change the color of them.
March 8, 200520 yr you need to sneak a vagina in there somewhere. that makes things funny when people dont realise it.
March 9, 200520 yr its fine, just i dont like the bubbles over the doggy, makes the picutre all look fucked up
March 10, 200520 yr I mean like give him blue glasses or something. The pink clashes with the orange and yellow. Keep the same style, change the color of them. so, a clash of color makes you look at it. otherwise, it's just prose.
March 10, 200520 yr imo, the text in the top left should form/bend/whatever with the color bands instead of just kinda stuck on there, since they're kinda lopsideded against the color bands in the bg. And on the black text on the dog biscuit put a little bit of space between the line so they aren't humping each other then again i'm not a gfx designer so what do I know :)
March 12, 200520 yr the pink glasses could be contrast eh? to get peoples attention maybe? i mean it is a flyer for gods sake